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Submitted: November 14, 2005
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Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D70
Shutter Speed: 10/400 second
F Number: F/2.8
Focal Length: 55 mm
Date Picture Taken: Sep 3, 2005, 5:37:08 PM

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smelling the message reaching your neural spine
dripping from every single pore of your skin
the bitter perfume making my nails peel back
A stranger behind the silver glass
this person you liked and then learned to loathe
falling down in that ego hole, the gutter glitter drew the wings -



untill your nose started to bleed...
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Ah, but I do not know this photograph already, Dimi.
And the words are spoken wonderfully. Are the words your own? I wouldn't doubt. You seem to be good with words, even in English ;]
The words go quite well with the emotion on her face. It appears to haunt her.
I love the way the light hits the side of her face and leaves the white glowing edge.
Her left eye shows the most emotion. And I love the way the light pierces it.
A great photograph my friend <3
her left eye is crraaazy!
Really like the lighting and contrast, nice expression and perspective too.
*smiles*

I would've liked to have seen the head just a bit closer to the left margin of the photo, but ottherwise... LOVE IT.

The soft lighting and amazing subtle colours...

*two thumbs up*

Nice work bud!

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shaun simpson
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I like this. Everything about it is just great.

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Sponge Bob:"ARE YOU READY TO GO CRAZY?"
Patrick: "I'M ALREADY HEARING VOICES!"
whoah, that eye is really yellow/golden.

i'd really like to see this a touch lighter. a light bounce would have really brought her out of that shadow.

a brighter-exposure layer mask in photoshop on that shadow on her face would probably do it.
hehe thanks my friend :)
i would not change the light in this picture as i almost released even darker. If you read the description and try to get my meaning you might get why it had to be this way. (but your recommandation makes sense...)
so does evrything about you :)
my words yes. In fact the words are telling her story, why she's staring this way.
It's good to see that there are some friends here to get the hidden meanings :)

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